Last week, we were finishing off a little section of my current WIP that chronicled the interactions of cutie pie Prince Kes and his meanie auntie Zelera. This week, I've moved to a section of story that shows a bit of what Ravyn (the heroine of this tale) and her mother Lareina have been involved with. The ladies boat had been destroyed by a Kraken, and they had been saved by two seals...and now they're on a small island. They've encountered two gentlemen who live on the island...
As they entered the cabin, Ravyn noticed Lareina and Murphy standing close together at the counter, their heads bumped up close to each other. Ravyn heard her mother giggle. Ravyn cleared her throat.
“Oh, you’re back...how was your walk?”
Murphy noticed the furs hanging from Ronan’s arm. He glowered at his son. “Are ye nae daft? What are ya thinkin’?”
So this is from my Nano draft, if you encounter something that sounds odd to you, or confuses you, I'd love to know what it is. As always, all comments are appreciated! Have a wonderful Sunday my fellow warriors!