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Last week, Medina was questioning a young sailor from Rasport. The conversation seemed to be going okay, and then he started to get suspicious...(I may have used some creative punctuation, it's highly likely that happened).
Last week, Medina was questioning a young sailor from Rasport. The conversation seemed to be going okay, and then he started to get suspicious...(I may have used some creative punctuation, it's highly likely that happened).
“You’re the enemy, you’re trying to gather our secrets.” He jumped to his feet, yanking hard on the alarm bell cord, a sharp clanging rent the air.
Medina spread her wings, leaping to the edge of the crow’s nest. She flapped her wings, blasting air into the boy’s face. He covered his head under his arms. “You are an ignorant little cuss,” she cried. “I had thought at first I would be able to call you friend, but I can see you cling blindly to your prejudiced notions. I hope you make it through this war my boy, you have no idea what you fight for.”
Love to hear your thoughts, so feel free to leave a comment.
Love to hear your thoughts, so feel free to leave a comment.
Sounds like the sailor is like many young warriors. No idea what they are fighting for, but good at following orders.
ReplyDeleteYup, not thinking on his own...
DeleteHe really got her mad. I wonder what she is going to do to him. Or is she just going to fly away?
ReplyDeleteYou'll get an idea in the next eight : )
DeleteGreat dialogue. I especially love that last line. BAM! =D Great work, Millie!
ReplyDeleteThanks : )
DeleteGreat tension and characterization, love the passion from Medina.
ReplyDeleteAnyone who lived under the reign of Zelera will be carrying some unspent passion...and Medina doesn't really need much reason anyhow, she is a harpy : )
DeleteGreat speech from Medina! Can't wait to read what happens next. :)
ReplyDeleteI may be able to promise a little action next week...maybe.
DeleteAw shoot, I feel bad for the kid, he really doesn't know any better. Paranoia runs rampant in wartime. Despite the presence of a harpy, this is so realistic :D :D
ReplyDeleteWell, thanks Marcia. He doesn't have a clue, but he's about to : )
DeleteYes, I could say this applies to most people in any war. Very realistic making your paranormal world seem very normal.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Fantasy has to be believable, I think...something we can connect with.
DeleteA universal appeal to all nations. Make love, not war. Politicians take heed, a harpy is coming your way to speak the truth. Maybe then people will listen.
ReplyDeleteExceptional eight.
She'd be an excellent speaker of the house.
DeleteGreat reaction from Medina. Even though I haven't read the previous snippets, I'd like to know why the sailor thinks she's the enemy?
ReplyDeleteHe's from a neighboring nation that is attacking her world, because they think Aigerach has kidnapped the King's fiancee.
DeleteI like the way Medina's words could apply to any war, real or fictional. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteA soldier should know what he's fighting for certainly. To blindly follow orders without thought or conviction is sheer folly.
DeletePropaganda can innoculate against common sense.
ReplyDeleteIt certainly can. Propaganda is behind a good many atrocities throughout history.
DeleteI wonder if that's the last we'll see of that young man? Sometimes it only takes one soldier to turn the tide . . .
ReplyDeleteRegardless, I still adore Medina---and I doubt he has any secrets she doesn't already know! :)
Well, he just rang an alarm bell...we'll see him just a little more. Not sure Medina's through with him yet : )
DeleteI like how cranky Medina is!:D
ReplyDeleteShe's a little bit tart...and a little sweet : )
DeleteI like Medina speech!
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DeleteMedina rocks! lol, I love that she called him a "little cuss". A very visual snippet, Millie. And I like the subtle message in this scene. Well done! :-)
ReplyDeleteWe'll thank you : ). Medina is pretty flipping cool!
ReplyDeleteI didn't see that coming. somehow I expected her to persuade him to talk to her awhile longer but...the scene is realistic for a time of war. Can't wait for whatever happens next, terrific snippet!
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue. I can feel her anger. I must go check out other snippets. This one has me intrigued.
ReplyDeleteI have a feeling that he has made an enemy he'll regret. btw, so realistic I actually thought I felt the wind!
ReplyDeleteLove this--I can still see both sides, which makes the fighting so much more emotional. Yeah, he's ignorant, and he needs more time to see that. But she's angry, and that's understandable, too.
ReplyDeleteI bet they run into each other again with some different view points.
Oh no, not a smart move. I sure do love Medina!
ReplyDeleteLove this line: “You are an ignorant little cuss,” she cried.
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue!
Fighting talk there.
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